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    dots Submission Name: Disorderdots
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    Author: Piper
    ASL Info:    17/ Female/ Europe
    Elite Ratio:    2.78 - 31/41/27
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 105
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 579



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    dotsDisorderdots
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    It is hard to live
    In this world full of hate
    When all you see is
    Black or white.

    No shades of gray,
    No colors at all,
    The brain only sees
    Good and bad.

    However, my love
    Is not perfect,
    But still he means
    Everything to me.

    He's the only one,
    That holds my hand,
    That keeps me from crossing
    That border line.

    I want to thank him,
    For bearing with me
    For giving me a chance
    To prove,
    That I can make it.




    Submitted on 2008-02-25 05:29:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I really like this write, I especially like this part .. "No shades of gray,
    No colors at all,
    The brain only sees
    Good and bad." it's true people only see 2 outcomes to everything. We canbe so close minded sometimes.
    I think he'll feel like you really appreciate him when he reads this good job. :-)
    | Posted on 2008-02-25 00:00:00 | by Jingles | [ Reply to This ]



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