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    dots Submission Name: The madness dots
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    Author: shadow of death
    ASL Info:    17/M/baltimore
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 38/53/34
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Rant/Misc
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    dotsThe madness dots
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    When there is madness it only becomes sadness.

    When there is love there is aso hatred.

    When there is happyness there is sorrow.

    when there is energy there will soon be a crash.

    when there is courge there is fear.

    One can not exsit without the other.

    Just like yin there is yang-good and evil-darkness and light.

    there is always an opposite to somthing.




    Submitted on 2008-02-25 11:23:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Amazing...it was short, simple....& very to the point. Though it didn't lack anything! You've done a good job on this peice. This is the first I've read from you...I like finding the only poems people don't comment on. Just kinda weird like that...OH again thanks alot for your input...on "Giving You A Voice."
    Beautiful, yet Corrupted
    Dominique
    | Posted on 2008-10-02 00:00:00 | by DearlyDeparted | [ Reply to This ]


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