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    Author: Alexandra
    ASL Info:    19/f/SC
    Elite Ratio:    1.89 - 54/76/57
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 175
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    Altered ideas, thoughts in the mist,
    Wonder if Love really exists.
    “One love for life” all over the walls,
    It gets in your brain burning holes.
    Idealistic poison pumps in your veins,
    All over the hypocrites fill in the stands.
    Judge and destroy: they know “the truth”
    Flying above wave “goodbye” to your youth.
    Relationships built, relationships broken,
    The memo is posted, always unspoken.
    They all mean so much, they all mean so little
    Breaks in between filled in with the Beatles.




    Submitted on 2008-02-25 12:50:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      very good
    I really like how you worded this whole poem
    keep it up
    | Posted on 2009-04-07 00:00:00 | by Toosha | [ Reply to This ]
      i was such a easy read with its flow and i feelt like some one had stolen my thoughts straight out of my head the ones that i have been having trouble disifering
    | Posted on 2008-02-26 00:00:00 | by abstracted | [ Reply to This ]
      Rhyme scheme is perfect for this. It bounces alonf and the next line jumps put at you. Original and very enjoyable.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2008-02-25 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]



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