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    dots Submission Name: Prayer Part IIIdots
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    Author: Tisa
    ASL Info:    17~Female~YourImagination
    Elite Ratio:    3.78 - 3/7/11
    Words: 138
    Class/Type: Personal Quotes/Misc
    Total Views: 165
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 861



    Description:
       Super short.

    This didn't really come out like I wanted it to, actually. But here it is anyway.

    Flame all you like.

    As long as it makes you happy :D

    Oh! And I wish to recommend that you read Part I and Part II first!

    I mean, it still works if you read just this one, but there's not too much of a mood without reading the other parts ;


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsPrayer Part IIIdots
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    Dear Father,

    First, I want to thank You for this beautiful, cloudy, and bright day! It felt good to have the hidden sun's warmth comfort my jovial smile.


    I also want to thank You for bringing my grammy home. I'm so very glad to know that she's not hurting anymore! I was crying a lot, only in places where You can see me. That's how happy I was.


    Her funeral is tomorrow. I pray that You'll give my family and I my grandmother's spiritual strength to remain with us until we get to see her again.


    My heart is filled with such overwhelming, joyous love, I'm afraid it'll cry, too.


    Thank You for everything, Father.


    I pray all of this is Jesus's wondrous name,


    Amen.




    Submitted on 2008-02-25 17:53:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      okay i feel for your family i have loved and lost
    but god is nothing but lies and [censored] bull[censored]
    okay there is nothing good that comes out of trying to live Christ like it is called live your live the best you can okay [censored] god and his holy word because i trusted him and all i got back was lies and disappointment trust in your self because that is really how you can trust 100 % of the time
    | Posted on 2008-02-25 00:00:00 | by anguished_child | [ Reply to This ]



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