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    dots Submission Name: Give me Freedomdots
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    Author: doppelganger
    ASL Info:    18/f/your brain
    Elite Ratio:    1.68 - 27/194/137
    Words: 132
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 234
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    dotsGive me Freedomdots
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    Yeah, my hand is feeble
    But I only have as much strength
    As is kept safe in my heart
    Kept barred and locked in gilded safe
    And there is as much heart
    In this feeble hand
    As there was in Ghandi.
    With my ears, eyes, soul, and mind
    I reach out to father time
    To liberate me from this cage
    Of limitations and technology
    Give me vinyl
                                        blessed hand
    Give me purpose
                                        iron hand
    Bring me history
                                        feeble hand




    Submitted on 2008-02-25 18:58:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I was doing pretty good with comprehension until I came to the line"Give me vinyl ."
    What purpose is its mean ? Perhaps you have need for a canvas to paint upon .(lol)
    | Posted on 2008-02-25 00:00:00 | by realpoet | [ Reply to This ]
      wow well i know were your coming from because im right fight for freedom so i can get of my house
    but your poem was deep but kinda confusing anyways
    good job
    | Posted on 2008-02-25 00:00:00 | by anguished_child | [ Reply to This ]
      wow well i know were your coming from because im right fight for freedom so i can get of my house
    but your poem was deep but kinda confusing anyways
    good job
    | Posted on 2008-02-25 00:00:00 | by anguished_child | [ Reply to This ]



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