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    dots Submission Name: i'll join you.dots
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    Author: narcolepsy
    ASL Info:    19/F/Pa
    Elite Ratio:    3.97 - 129/135/60
    Words: 353
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsi'll join you.dots
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    i've watched people get eaten alive.

    mostly they like drugs

    the venus fly trap that draws them in
    with flourescent colors pleasing to the eye

    and then snaps shut.

    i've seen kids get swallowed up in macadam.

    they think they can make it

    the streets look like fun on the surface
    they taste like freedom and rebellion

    until they trip in the cracks.

    i've been held in a cell counting bricks like my chances.

    how did i get here again?

    this is what you get when you try to
    take freedom into your own hands

    i fucked up.

    i've seen so much now that haunts me in sleep.

    the blackhole barrel of a gun in my face
    a heroin addict scratching until she bled
    the spitting image of a mother i never knew

    my list could go on for a mile
    and you still wouldn't understand.

    but we all know what it's like

    to be abused
    to be neglected
    to be hurt

    to feel broken
    to feel empty

    to long to die
    just so you'll never have to feel again.

    sometimes we try the drink
    to drown out the demons
    smoke them out
    burn them out
    slice them to slivers

    but they still remain
    underneath it all.

    we just layer up on disguises
    and try to numb ourselves at all costs.

    remember when you came of age
    when you became a young woman
    when you became a young man
    the struggle to find your identity and

    we all used those words.

    remember your dark years, as i have.

    the poetic justice in our negative behaviors
    and our belief that we were not the problem

    only led us further down that path
    and some of us keep going.

    if you want to turn around, i'll join you.




    Submitted on 2008-02-25 21:25:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was written very well. I loved the way you structured it. Fantastic. I wouldn't change anything, for it'd lose it's effect. Keep up the awesome work, and I'll keep reading

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    | Posted on 2008-02-26 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]


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