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    dots Submission Name: Calmdots
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    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
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       One of my oldies. Written this exactly after the poem anger.


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    dotsCalmdots
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    why you get tensed is you don't know,
    but it is useless to you as i can show.
    When there are matters to be taken serious,
    you get tensed as the symbol of aries.
    But matters are things to be thought to the deep,
    a cool mind can provide the answer even asleep.
    So don't get tensed on whatever you do,
    cause it is a waste of blood and a waste for you.




    Submitted on 2008-02-26 05:10:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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