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    dots Submission Name: days of deathdots
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    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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       thought about death. Then thought what death means. Then thought well i had died so many times. Why bother


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    dotsdays of deathdots
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    life that ends starts with a wound
    a name to distinct us from the group
    thrills they say with the beginning of life
    search for purpose salad and soup.

    fruits of nature that make us grow
    experience of life that we gain
    payback for nature and something to think
    miseries and happiness the joy the pain.

    count we don't till the end is near
    yet we thrive to know whats more
    say do they to be happy to die
    days of death the end to adore




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