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    dots Submission Name: Dream.dots

    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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       Even though this is my old poem i still think this is more appropriate for me even till date. Dreams don't come true....

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    Dreams are dreams for never will be true,
    for never will be for you and me too.
    There are good ones there are bad ones,
    each teaches a lesson in life to run.
    But all are simply our simple imagination,
    they will never come true in our life that functions.
    For there is no god.
    For there is no god for so which i have known,
    for the path to success is not actually shown,
    for the power and will will the victory come to you,
    for the courage and sacrifice for so you have to do,
    for the work and work for you will be doing,
    for not blind faith and marks for assuming.

    Submitted on 2008-02-26 05:18:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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