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    dots Submission Name: Falling in lovedots

    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       Oldies and real bad. Written about love when i did not know what it is.

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    dotsFalling in lovedots

    falling in love is of everything in nothing
    describing the need for a woman of something
    the one that you seek with all your heart
    open wide to gasp the beauty inside
    you don't know when you fall in love
    you just know you are somehow
    the dreams the flowers the gifts the memories
    are of all that remains in the love of eternity
    waiting for two victims is the love bird of dreams
    the rage to be together is the aim it seems

    Submitted on 2008-02-26 05:21:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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