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    dots Submission Name: fire in medots
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    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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       I have no idea what i felt while writing this but this is one of the most rare poem i had written cause i don't write in such a style.


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    dotsfire in medots
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    The feel of light
    the depth of a heart
    sharp as a pin
    of all that is apart.
    The rage of sex
    hunger for more
    the need or deed
    of all that is sore.
    Humane it seems
    the heart to be rude
    killing you daily
    in life to be shrewd.
    Love of life
    the endless search
    walking till the end
    waiting in the perch.
    Death to end
    all the miseries
    home to be felt
    of all those worries.
    Search for doom
    hunt for life
    all that matters
    sharp as a knife.
    In all the kings born
    in one that it seems
    for the queen of life
    fire of dreams.




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