sunbeam

Author: caspian ASL Info:    23/m/Denmark Elite Ratio:    2.31 - 134 /189 /57 Words: 82

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sunbeam

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There are changes in the weather and leaves fall they shadder on mountains and on the hill side There are crystal snow falling and mothers are calling their children inside for the night Your the rain causing thunder the reason I wonder about growing up all the time Some might blame it on the season or melancholy reading but ive never felt this before Every morning drunk flower every sunbeam i devour is bringing me closer to you

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