and then write bout it. Cause you're in whatever it is too deep to really explain it.
Rhyme is overused. Try assonance or consonance a little bit. Some of it feels a bit forced with the rhyming, and it some places even the rhyme couldn't fit. Don't shoehorn a poem into a style, make the form match the function. And vice versa. Cause you're rhymin' about themes. and themes well... they're broad strokes.