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Author: Sharati_hottie
ASL Info:    20/ Female / MICHIGAN
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Words: 27
Class/Type: Misc /Nostalgia
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My mother used to say this to us (my brother, sisters, and I) when we were children. She always had a way of making something Weird, Weird, but funny


I love yah in my heart, and,
I love yah in my liver, but,
If I had yah in my pocket,
I'd throw yah in the river!!!

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