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    dots Submission Name: De fiecare datadots
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    Author: DAlin
    Elite Ratio:    2.12 - 82/137/75
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 786
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 828



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    dotsDe fiecare datadots
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    De fiecare data cand m-atingi
    Timpul se opreste-n loc,
    Cand ma privesti simt ca traiesc
    Simt c-as putea sa te iubesc.


    Cat imi doresc sa te sarut
    Sa te ating si sa-ti soptesc...alta ca tine n-am sa mai gasesc.


    Prin parul tau vreau sa-mi plimb mana
    In ochii tai vreau sa ma pierd,
    Buzele tale sa le simt pe pieptul meu...
    ...sa fim mereu doar tu si eu.


    Orice privire, orice cuvant
    Orice miscare, orice gand
    Le simt...te simt...vreau sa te fac sa zbori,
    Ca-ci tu-mi v-ei da mereu fiori.


    Vreau sa-ti simt corpul langa-l meu
    Parfumul pielii tale sa m-ambete de amor,
    Sa fac dragoste cu tine...
    ...tu nici nu stii cat te ador.






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