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    dots Submission Name: Bet you think this poem is about Udots
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    Author: mekisha4ever
    ASL Info:    39yespleaseNV.
    Elite Ratio:    1.58 - 38/36/47
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 843
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    Description:
       it is!!!!!
    4 that one I long to love, U


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    dotsBet you think this poem is about Udots
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    I am sorry that I come on to hard & fast. I just am not shy in any form of the word. more like unabashed love to give.

    I just cant be any other way, like a flower in Bloom, but I am no wall flower. I love the lime light.

    I really like you more than I should already, I have lived and loved on the road to my future.

    I know I should let you go and never look back to this dream of a Love like you and all you have to give.

    Some how I just feel that this may not just be a dream of the broken hearted.

    You just mite be all I ever needed to take me out of the garden and show me the world, I would so love to see it.




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