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    dots Submission Name: Is what we see is what we seedots
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    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       Well a little old doubt on what reality was. Oldies.


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    dotsIs what we see is what we seedots
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    Everything in the world is what we see
    and every thing is what we see.
    But what actually is you or me,
    as it may be real or fake to me.
    Who am is it really me
    or someone whom i am to actually flee.
    Every animal,bird or flea
    lives their life eventually.
    But what is beyond we never have the key,
    is what we see is what we see.




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