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    dots Submission Name: Joy a curedots
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    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
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       Well one of my oldies poems written after seeing a sad film. Don't quite remember the name of the film.


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    dotsJoy a curedots
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    sometimes are times when we get sick,
    doctors to choose which one to pick.
    Once picked the cure is given,
    then the disease is soon driven.
    There are some who remain dull,
    even though no cure and driven null.
    Disease cannot go out of the man,
    will never go however we ran.
    The man can go out of the disease,
    only thing to do is to actually please.
    Joy is a cure for every thing,
    there is no where to go or anything to bring.




    Submitted on 2008-02-27 03:10:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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