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    dots Submission Name: Life is a magicdots
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    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Description:
       Well even though this is one of the old poems of mine this one is a good one. But unfortunately there is forced rhyme.


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    dotsLife is a magicdots
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    life is a magic that never ends ,
    cycle by cycle each person spends.
    Living his life with sorrow and happiness,
    with some of the part living in sadness.
    The cycle continues with all people there,
    where does the thoughts go ,do they go somewhere?
    Beyond very thing there is something,
    isn't life magic where anything can happen ?anything!




    Submitted on 2008-02-27 04:51:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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