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    dots Submission Name: Lonelydots
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    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsLonelydots
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    what a fear in me to be lonely as to be,
    it is horrible to anyone to resist or to see.
    The height of loneliness is endless as it is,
    but happiness comes somewhere for her or either his.
    Lonely to be fear in everyone's heart,
    so try to remain free and never be apart.
    For friends are the one for you to see,
    for relations are the one for you to be.




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