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    dots Submission Name: mind of rumblesdots
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    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
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    dotsmind of rumblesdots
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    try to speak and that is what i know
    in this world so bad in this world and so
    the heart the pain the sorrow the vain
    all that goes in the life to go.
    many to one or one to many
    makes it complete to fake it so
    the journey so hard is it so hard
    made in life the rumbles of life.
    as many are the thoughts and so are the lives
    till death will so be with the mind with rumbles.




    Submitted on 2008-02-27 05:01:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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