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i thought well people write about reflection i can write about a mirror image.
life in itself has it in all
can we see or it does as so
eyes to see itself at-last
life to know existence seed to sow.
knowing in life a mirage or real
we are what we are as so
first we believe in belief of what
eyes may betray but not let go.
exist or may not you the last breath
exist or fought a battle till death
exist or thought to think to fetch
the mirror of all tells the truth you forget.
filled with happiness you know to live
in a dream in real in imaginary oh
look in the mirror your life's reflection
of you it tells and nothing to know...
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