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    dots Submission Name: Mirrordots
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    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       i thought well people write about reflection i can write about a mirror image.


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    dotsMirrordots
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    life in itself has it in all
    can we see or it does as so
    eyes to see itself at-last
    life to know existence seed to sow.

    knowing in life a mirage or real
    we are what we are as so
    first we believe in belief of what
    eyes may betray but not let go.

    exist or may not you the last breath
    exist or fought a battle till death
    exist or thought to think to fetch
    the mirror of all tells the truth you forget.

    filled with happiness you know to live
    in a dream in real in imaginary oh
    look in the mirror your life's reflection
    of you it tells and nothing to know...




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