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    dots Submission Name: mother (thoughts)dots
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    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 159
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       well this is what i thought about of my mother when i was away from her. my god she is......


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    dotsmother (thoughts)dots
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    great are the heights in the life of a person
    little have we known men to be in curse
    never to be known the love of a mother
    complete and content the heart so nurtured.

    experience does a woman the gift of her life
    the painful experience of joy the queen of someone
    jewels are junk to be with her is all
    needed in life the birth of a new born.

    enters does a life with weight to be drained
    happiness and pain weird oh my!
    but after the pain is the never ending joy
    mother oh mother we thank her to cry.

    cry and cry she hugs to calm us
    the warmth of love we get so precious
    grow and grow to go away from her
    think less of her as we grow to be older
    inside i cry my dear god of me
    mother my mother love u till death.




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