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    dots Submission Name: into the cryptic wilddots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsinto the cryptic wilddots
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    i'm slipping into the pheasant's eye
    with a yearn
    for the bright of dark
    upon me.

    my honeyed tongue
    wraps music
    into the cryptic wild
    of adonis palestina.

    i melt lillies into the wood
    for ember.
    the fire of the east
    is in my amber eye.

    i speak life
    into the world
    like nymphcea alba
    nuphar lutea carpe diem.

    the willow is beside me
    in it's eccentric shell.
    ctecias found me in the park
    & i'm graving inward towards a shallow light...




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