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    dots Submission Name: P.S. I ain't offended- Dedicated to crack cocdots
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    Author: Rex Gold
    ASL Info:    18/m/U.S.A
    Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 60/46/67
    Words: 214
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 114
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    dotsP.S. I ain't offended- Dedicated to crack cocdots
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    I went outside to see what this rain looked like
    This was at night/so I called it jewel
    The environment was just rinsing off
    not cleaning the filth though
    Yo when drops touch me I'm no foe
    I'm as gentle as the poets come to concrete
    them grams came out of a girl stomach,
    boys pocket
    I went outside to see what the clouds looked like
    This was at daylight/so I called it valuable
    I let my opera music play
    As the bodies went into destruction another day
    as the polished rims swiftly turned
    brains burned/so I called it poisonous inferno
    Once I had her smoke blown in my face
    Kitchen chemist, street pharmist
    but they don't say base
    I went inside to see what my heart looked like
    This was nolonger defiled/so I called it my beau
    100 lbs of blow- 100 people to waste their lives
    and don't even care about yours or mine
    they don't receive erasers on their pencils
    Because they'll regret it all
    wishin' they seen the grace I saw
    Real talk- about the epidemic




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