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    dots Submission Name: Musicdots
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    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       WEll according to the poet that i am now well i feel pity on what i have written. Just for the sake of rhyming. oldies


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    dotsMusicdots
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    Music is a wonderful song,
    that fills the heart with joy or sadness.
    The singers sing more than a furlong,
    some are like which fills us with madness.
    Sometimes tunes are touches the heart
    and some which breaks it apart.
    The more the music we hear
    more we get bored of it.
    But new music comes mere
    and we feel it fantastic.
    But there are some which are unforgettable,
    music is so nice that it is never regrettable




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