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my life as it goes
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good one according to me i
just depicting as life went by. oldies
my life as it goes
life that started sweet as it did
find did i love the happiness the gift
love everywhere towards me that i found
born was i with the life with a shift.
grow as i did so did my feelings
stronger and it did in the days to come
find did i find the happiness and pain
funny it seems in the life to fore come.
love did i see the woman of my dreams
maya i thought for so it seems
tell me the truth are you with me
and find so i did that dreams are dreams.
school did end with another to see
yet will i remember her till death
find did i find her gorgeous in all
yet she did go apart from me to set,
set my life did she do to thank
my love for her forever will be
deep was the wound but the wound did heal
wait will i see the real maya to be.
so now i am waiting for the one
wait will i wait forever if to live
dream't have i on how she will be
life continues till for not to forgive.
Submitted on 2008-02-28 04:35:07
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