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    dots Submission Name: No one cares about medots
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    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 531
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       The second poem that i wrote in my life.


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    dotsNo one cares about medots
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    I am alone in this horrible place,
    Not even worth am I to show my face.
    I have no wealth no nothing,
    where people have usually something.
    I am living which is of no use,
    i am the lucky one who has no dues.
    But there is no one for me to see,
    there is none in the world who cares about me.




    Submitted on 2008-02-28 04:40:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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