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    dots Submission Name: Nullnessdots
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    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    Description:
       meditation at a serious level. oldies


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    dotsNullnessdots
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    i feel a feel of nothing i felt,
    a little different from any situation dealt.
    There is neither happiness nor sadness,
    for there is only the feeling of nullness.
    The final goal is getting close,
    for what to do is up of my nose.
    Study and study my parents and mind,
    the time to do that i never find.
    But when i find the time to do,
    my mind says nothing to do.
    For now will i follow a heart which is there,
    for it says the right path which will lead to somewhere,
    ------------ my goal.




    Submitted on 2008-02-28 04:42:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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