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    dots Submission Name: Ohmdots
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    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       understood the power of ohm when i tried to meditate


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    dotsOhmdots
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    ohm is a word of magic powers,
    which can do and change thorns to flowers.
    The peace in the mind that sets when you say,
    is the freedom of that you get from the heavy working day.
    All the sadness and all the happiness,
    is removed to blank almost nullness.
    Each time you say your mind gets cool,
    so does your body purify and pool.
    Settling down on all the things,
    then the after life is the bird that sings,
    _sweet.




    Submitted on 2008-02-28 04:43:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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