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    dots Submission Name: Peace of minddots

    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/I am dead inside
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    dotsPeace of minddots

    Never do i have a peace of mind,
    with work to do and sought and find.
    I want ot be free from the chains around me,
    but never do i get the time to see.
    Time is the problem,never can be stopped.
    It runs through the journey i do get flopped.
    Some people say your time is not good.
    But fighting it is what i should.
    Then fight isn't easy as it troubles more,
    difficult it is to get into the next floor.
    The people around are always kind,
    but never do i have a peace of mind.

    Submitted on 2008-02-28 04:44:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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