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    dots Submission Name: Cold; Shadowdots
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    Author: _Osiris_
    ASL Info:    18 Chick Ottawa
    Elite Ratio:    0.47 - 1/5/56
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 116
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1170



    Description:
       I recently got in touch with a person that I thought I had once lost. And last night I guess after getting the truth out in the open about myself and I've been coping this dream came to me, Vivid as if I was living it. Now hopefully I wont return to the shadow, to drown within the cold.


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    Frozen here in the darkness
    I didn’t think I’d be alone
    With the wind blowing
    The cold rolls in
    Creeping across the floor boards
    Edging closer to my body
    My heart screams in agony
    With the impulse to run
    Although my feet seem to be still
    Stitched to the floor
    The struggle begins
    Stitches start to rip
    And the flesh begins to weaken
    Breaking free from what grounds me
    From what holds me down
    So run
    RUN!
    Crashing into objects
    Falling as they hit the floor
    Stumbling to the door
    A figure starts to form
    At the end of this hallway
    Reaching out
    Reaching for me
    Creeping closer
    As if gliding on the floor beneath
    Getting my grip
    Turning the handle
    Rushing out the door into the light
    My heart climbs into my throat
    And knees weaken
    Falling into the grass
    Looking back
    The figure still stands
    Still eurns for me
    Hungers for me
    Picking myself up
    And moving on
    Leaving the shadow behind
    Within the past




    Submitted on 2008-02-28 12:23:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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