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    dots Submission Name: Cuno Sheridots
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    Author: SanctityExposed
    ASL Info:    25
    Elite Ratio:    3.98 - 48/66/40
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 942
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 374



    Description:
       Just something cute I made up, about an expecting mother and her baby inside.


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    dotsCuno Sheridots
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    My baby, her name, is Cuno Sheri
    Each day she grows inside of me
    A blessing to Earth, it's so true to see
    That this little girl can make angels believe
    My Miracle life, so precious, so sweet
    I'll love her forever, everyone agrees
    So baby, my baby, give life to me please
    You're my life, my love, my Cuno Sheri.




    Submitted on 2008-02-28 16:00:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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