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    dots Submission Name: It's All Emotionsdots
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    Author: charmedidentity
    ASL Info:    19/F/International
    Elite Ratio:    7.35 - 777/741/288
    Words: 155
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 106
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 963



    Description:
       Who has ever had their feelings get the best of them? All those who have, raise their hands and see if this write makes u feel like this is how the emotion tricked u in acting up to it.
    I hope you like this one


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    dotsIt's All Emotionsdots
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    I’m followed by all kinds of energy
    Invading my thoughts with their smoke
    As I inhale the scent they offer me

    The scratches of my fingernails
    Has no effect on the wallpaper
    As I try to find a passage way
    Hidden somewhere on the walls
    Wishing for time to be on my side
    Before the smoke whispers words
    To soothe my soul and pay attention
    Let the emotions overcome my being

    There is only a window for my escape
    Yet the pressure I force on the glass
    Leaves my eyes in shattered tears
    As the air becomes more restricted
    My thoughts vanished from my head
    I begin to panic with deeper breathes
    No hope is left for a chance at freedom
    I accept the wicked fate of my entrapment

    I’m following temptation to a room
    Where it locks me up before I realize
    And releases a smoke filled with emotions




    Submitted on 2008-02-28 19:16:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow.


    I never knew there was someone else who had felt what I felt.
    One day...maybe you will find yourself...perhaps you already have, through the smoke.
    I used to slam the door on what I was feeling, what was penetrating me when I felt...
    and perhaps you can. You don't have to let the walls be there...
    you must be a pretty sensitive person, do you know that?
    "I am followed by all kinds of energy..."
    you don't need to be heart-hearted to ignore what you feel sometimes.
    Thank you for the write.

    (typos: 'deeper breathes,' 'deeper breaths?')
    | Posted on 2008-02-29 00:00:00 | by dancer-of-words | [ Reply to This ]



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