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    Author: amanda99737
    ASL Info:    15/Girl/Alaska
    Elite Ratio:    1.89 - 11/24/52
    Words: 164
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 95
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    Bytes: 967



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    Feel'n sicker, try'n to be clearer. see'n things strangly go ahead appraise me. die'n to try, lacking the gumption. you lied to me! It's gonna be fine, well it's not the time, not the time for games pull me out of this haze. I'm walk'n a maze. beginning to go insane from this feel'n of being slain. im not fucking crazy! go ahead appraise me! not speak'n or hear'n only think'n pull your eyes off me!, no attention or fuss is needed i don't need you, you conceded whore. no! i can't take it anymore! get out, step off, fuck off! I'm tierd, fall'n asleep, fall'n apart. watch me fly to the top of the charts. get the rubber room ready, cuz there is no remedy, for this insanity. men in white suits, take'n me away. wish'n i could stay. kicking me while i stand, im hanging by a strand and need'n a hand. get'n pulled up, feel'n stronger, hold me up longer.




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