Very Good Job with this one
To me Friends are an extension of family
It takes a lot for me to call someone a Friend
And you captured exactly what a True Friend is very well with your words
I am making this a Favorite
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
Well, I must say that I typically don't like these kinds of poems because they tend to come across quite hokey and cheesy. However, you did a fantastic job of making it sound so completely natural. No part of this piece seemed like you were trying too hard to find a word that rhymed.
It was a very honest piece and I really appreciated how you presented it. Very nice job!
Wow this is awesome! Im glad you finished it.
And its perfect. It touches practically every subject and pin points all the greatness of friends.
Its the perfect poem anyone could give to a friend.
I love it, and like always, you did a wonderful job!
My first thought it that I wouldn't say it's too short. You keep things manageable. If you put too many ideas in there it is very easy to repeat yourself, bore the reader, send the poem in circles. Yeah, it's a subject that you could say a lot about but sometimes the significance is in the restraint. It's good as it is.
I think, although the rhyme and rhythm is rather simplistic, it works here because it has that 'everyman' feel to it. Anyone can read it, appreciate it and see the truth that's there. You don't have to paint it up with extravagance and complexities. It's also about the best side of friends, which is the simplistic view of things, so the style is even more appropriate. If there were dark undertones it wouldn't work so well.
It has the feel of something you might write in a birthday card or of something that is framed and hanging on the wall in someones hallway. It is what it is and it says what it says and that is what's nice about it.