why do they do this ? -------------------------------------------
why do they do this ?
forcing us not to be together i don't know
but what i do know this
this is bullshit and i hate them for what they a they are doing
but i can not stop they the only thing i can do is run , run and never stop until I'm eight teen
but its ok because i will get mine they wont know when
but there is a place for her its called my arms and i'll never let go
fuck this fuck them all
because this my life and i'll do what i want with it
baby i love you and your my everything i love you
always and forever
eh, punctuation died a long long time ago. just ask e cummings. he did amazing things with and without punctuation.
i don't know parents create the 'romeo/juliet' syndrome. telling a kid that it can't date another kid generally only makes that kid more determined to go after that forbidden fruit, in my opinion.
but you should respect your parents' decision and follow thier rules. the best thing for you both, as dreary and dul as it sounds, is to concentrate on your classes and make good enough grades to hit college. because college gives you degrees and degrees get you real jobs and real jobs get you money...and money gives you the ability to make your own rules.
i didn't believe in this stuff when i was younger. i thought hard work and determination would make up for the college degrees. my sister went to college, got her degree, had fun, too.
guess which one of us still takes orders from people. guess which one stands on her feet eight hours a day with her back aching and temper seething because she just wants that customer to quit belly-aching because he thinks he was overcharged a nickel. guess which one of us says 'you want fries with that' for a living.
now guess which one of us has two cars, a huge house, children who have never known hunger or fear...guess which one of us never cried herself to sleep because she was afraid of losing the roof over her head. guess which one of us can tell the world to shove it because she makes her own rules.
i know it's harsh, the way the world runs on money and not love...i didn't make those rules but i follow them. fighting them only leaves you tired and hungry and alone.
your parents want what's best for you, because they don't want to see you suffer from poverty when you become an adult. they want you to use your potential to make the world better. and you can only make the world better from the inside, not on the outside.
Kinda the same as I said on the other one. Not very organized. Try to make just one point at a time. Write a poem about that one thing. Slice this big picture into smaller pictures, and describe them and everything you feel about them. Perhaps, take these poems and pick a favorite line or set of lines, then work off that, but keep it based around that line.
For this one, I'd try
"but there is a place for her its called my arms and i'll never let go"
Also, use some punctuation and basic grammar
ie: But there is a place for her. It's called my arms, and I'll never let go.
Submission Name: why do they do this ?
