this time -------------------------------------------
this time I'm weak this time
fall the blood run from my shoulder to wrist
dripping off my finger tips
I lay here now hoping you will save me from myself
but no its okay because really you shouldn't be the one to pick me up
I should be the one that pick you and myself up
I don't know any more I really have stopped caring about the rest of this world
our parent can try to keep these forces that drive us away but they'll never stop them
they can try and chain me down
but I'll always get up
I'll break these chains
and I'll come for you my dear
I love you I love you so very much
and all the thing I have done in my past
your the only thing that make sense
I love you and I'll never leave you
I'll never be another name on your list
that scratch off
I promise I know your feeling alone because that's
what I'm feeling but not worry anymore because I'm coming for you and we can take off and get out off here and never look back
I love you carol
I love you so very much
and I you will have my heart forever
I love you
Darrell
Hmm...you're sort of just rambling, and it's not really organized or effective. I don't know if you're trying to make good poetry or just express your feelings a bit, so I won't criticize much.
I do like the image in these lines
"they can try and chain me down
but I'll always get up
I'll break these chains
and I'll come for you my dear"
That made me smile.
Keep fighting, don't give up.
Submission Name: this time 
