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    dots Submission Name: My Present State of Minddots
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    Author: LostPastures
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    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsMy Present State of Minddots
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    I keep my thoughts tied to posts standing upright.
    At times they seem to maneuver out of bondage
    and wriggle on the floor, creating creases in the hardwood.
    But yet I doubt that the strength of the taut rope
    suspends them from the frantic action that they catch,
    for they are circumventing happiness and storing sorrow.

    I keep my thoughts tied to ancient hidden wheels.
    At times they seem to spin inside hidden wisdoms
    but I seem to doubt that that possibility is earthen.
    They rotate just outside of understanding
    causing them to bask inside rays of acedia.

    My thoughts rely on the tension spread throughout despondency.
    I pity them
    I loathe them
    I envy them
    because they are circumventing happiness and storing sorrow.




    Submitted on 2008-02-29 19:17:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I think, intelligent, sincere and yes sad, but great because you have separated yourself from your thoughts. Often people seem to forget that they are not what they think. This is written from a view of being able to stand back and expresses a compassion from 'self' to its 'thoughts' and not mistaking them to be the same and at there mercy. Choice is being exercised from a place of freedom from them. i like very much. More!
    Now knowing you are not them, the thoughts which store sorrow, I would do battle and cut their heads off!!
    | Posted on 2008-02-29 00:00:00 | by Soloman | [ Reply to This ]



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