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    dots Submission Name: Kaysaki Takaradots
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    Author: Samichan
    ASL Info:    14/F/America
    Elite Ratio:    2.37 - 2/2/4
    Words: 975
    Class/Type: Story/Misc
    Total Views: 87
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 5968



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       This is a story about Kaysaki who is an anthro wolf.


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    dotsKaysaki Takaradots
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    Chapter 1 The adventure begins!


    Kaysaki is an anthro. Which means its a human with animal features. And he is an anthro wolf. He has tan colored hair which is layered and a little past his chin.


    Kaysaki was walking the woods, the woods was really peaceful the sun was shinning the birds were chirping it was a beautiful day. He wished his girlfriend Kamishu was here to enjoy this. But she was off on vacation with her parents, so he continued walking in the woods, he picked an apple from the tree and began to eat it.


    As he finished his apple he tossed it aside, and sat on a rock. Then his friend started walking towards him. His friend was an anthro panther with black cat ears, a thin black tail, and shaggy black hair similar to Kaysaki's. His name was Niahki (Nye-kye / Nie-Kie). He walked up to Kaysaki and smiled. "There you are!" He said.


    Kaysaki lifted his head up "here I am, what are you doing?" he asked looking at Niahki. "Well I was bored so I thought you wanted to go to the arcade or get something to eat. Kaysaki sighed and hoisted him self up. "I'm not much into games." Niahki looked disappointed. "But something to eat sounds good." Said Kaysaki even thow he just had an apple which was not filling.


    Niahki's face lit up. "Great lets hit Kongo's" Niahki said while starting to walk forward. Kaysaki sighed once more back to the city he thought. He looked back at the woods as the sun hit it and he turned around. As they entered the city Kaysaki looked around and spotted Kongo's. "Over there" He said while pointing at K sign. Niahki nodded and headed towards it.


    Kaysaki followed as he walked on the side walked on the side walk he he glanced at the moving cars beside him. Why do I live here in the city? Why cant I live in a nice brick house with Kamishu that had woods in the back with a path. Kaysaki wondered. So they entered Kongo's and went up to the counter Niahki ordered a hamburger, coke, and frys. Kaysaki ordered a salad, chocolate milkshake, and frys, he was a vegetarian. They found a table and sat down. "So how are you ... and Kamishu?" Niahki asked while squirting ketchup on his tray. Kaysaki smiled at the thought of Kamishu. "I'm good and so is Kamishu I talk to her on her cell she says its kinda boring and she wishes shes here, and you and Kashi?"


    "Well thats good, and I'm great, and so is Kashi." Kaysaki smiled as he stuck his fork into his salad and took a bite. Niahki scarfed his burger down and waited for Kaysaki to be done. He finally finished and so they got up and took care of there messes and left. Niahki sighed "now what" he asked. "I dont know" Kaysaki said while looking towards the direction of the woods. Niahki laughed "you tree hugger lets do some sketch's of things in the woods." He suggested. Kaysaki's face lit up and he laughed and gave a thank you smile. Kaysaki handed one of his spare sketch books to Niahki.


    "Thank you" said Niahki while taking the sketch book from Kaysaki. "Right now lets get going" Kaysaki said while speed walking towards the woods. Niahki laughed while catching up to him. They reached the woods and Kaysaki raced over to the rock he was at before and sat down started to sketch the trees and the plants and everything and everything that was in his view as the sun light hit it. Niahki sat on a stump a little from Kaysaki and Niahki began to sketch Kaysaki as he sketched also.


    All of a sudden there was leafs crunching and it sounds like someone was approaching. They both lift there heads up. Mother Nature appears, she is an anthro fox. She is wearing a long golden dress with golden with golden roses om it. Her hair is long and down to her waist. And her hair is a natural red color with sparkles in it. Her eyes are a chocolate brown and golden sparkely eye shadow.


    As she brushed her dress to get the dirt and stuff off. Kaysaki and Niahki stared blankly with shock. "M.. mo... mother nature?" Kaysaki shuddered. "Please call me Gracie, but I have news for you Kaysaki, Kamishu is missing." Said Gracie where her smile turned into a frown. "Missing? MISSING?" Kaysaki roared. "Cant you find her like you found me?" Asked Kaysaki. "I'm sorry hun, I cant I already new where you are. I take care of nature not a missing person finder. See you and Kamishu are peacefull and take care of nature so I keep a look out for you guys along with others."


    Niahki looked up worried. "Then its settled were going to find her no matter what you, me, Kashi, and you Grace we need your help, do you have the slightest idea where she is?" Niahki asked. Kaysaki blinked in shock then made a smile. "Right, but are you sure Kashi wants to go?" "Of course she does." Niahki and Kaysaki both looked at Gracie. "Okay I will help but I wont be with you all the way after all I am mother nature. So you guys both have two days to get Kashi and your selfs together. And then we will meet back here at 9:00am tomorrow. "Right." Kaysaki and Niahki said while heading home to prepare for there adventure ahead of them.




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