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    dots Submission Name: Driving Home on a Snowy Nightdots
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    Author: freshcookies
    Elite Ratio:    4.15 - 63/77/45
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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    dotsDriving Home on a Snowy Nightdots
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    The snow sparkles under my headlights like glitter,
    Like stars,
    Like the eyes of a girl in love for the first time,
    And for a moment, I forget how much I hate the frozenness
    The bitter,
    Heartless,
    Deadly,
    Cruel
    Winter,
    And I smile,
    And wonder why moments like these
    Always
    Make me think of you.




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