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    dots Submission Name: Fly Shawtee Penelopedots
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    Author: Rex Gold
    ASL Info:    18/m/U.S.A
    Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 60/46/67
    Words: 196
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 57
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1340



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       Some will disagree I know.I might have brought out the wrong mechanics for it though.It still turned pretty okay for just junk poetry to me anyway.Take it the way you see it.(Self viewed has nothing to do with the reader.I only put it in there cause that's the way it was written.)


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    dotsFly Shawtee Penelopedots
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    Don't you know, O' don't you know
    That you too are a target of rapture?
    The death of a salesman
    The ascendance of an actor;
    Don't you know, O' don't you know
    That poets are liars but not all?
    Fresh like the receipts from purchased typwriters
    but no whole inside holes
    (That's how you can tell)
    Don't you know, O' don't you know
    That we have excavated them ourselves?
    Crop fields are stories.
    Young flower I am, perpetual from the
    rims of my thumbs as to the billions
    of pieces which formulates my skin
    My love within.When the blood itself turns
    dormant.I'll never go without.
    Don't you know, O' don't you know
    Don't you know, O' don't you know
    (Self viewed)
    That even I wanted my hate for things
    To ruin so I could walk with orange
    Stars illustrious to my spirit.
    Friend let no wolf stop your heart from pouring, or else no beautiful landmark
    will greet you in tranquility
    Don't you know, O' don't you know
    I have declined on others quickly?
    Don't you know, O' don't you know
    That you can surely share your gallon of faith.




    Submitted on 2008-03-01 01:29:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Ok, so to start off with, wow. You said that I probably wouldn't like this and you were wrong. Even if I do not get the meaning behind a piece I always like them because of what lies behind the words. I mean each write is usually a way for the writer to say something or to express something and that means something to me. And now to say, yeah, I didn't really get it. lol I would ask for it to be explained to me line by line, but really that would be selfish of me, so I will just ask for the general gist of it. I'm sorry that I did not have more to say or critique upon, I'll definitely read something else of yours, so there is hope for a better one from me. lol Peace and inspiration!

    Duv
    | Posted on 2008-03-01 00:00:00 | by Draumrkopa | [ Reply to This ]



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