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    dots Submission Name: Disconnecteddots
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    Author: Ola
    ASL Info:    18/f/USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 221/187/42
    Words: 210
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 56
    Average Vote:    1.0000
    Bytes: 1299



    Description:
       *Although the mind can’t recall, the heart knows it all*


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    You were my best friend
    When we just kids
    And we promised each other
    We’d share our first kiss

    But somehow through life
    You stayed there, I moved
    Both I always hoped and prayed
    That one day I’ll meet you

    And I can’t help but feel so disconnected
    It seems so unreal, I’m almost unaffected
    But a part of my heart it hurts
    Cos I’ll never see you, I miss you so much
    I hope I see you up there someday
    To never be disconnected again

    Tuesday evening
    Going about my work
    I felt a cold shiver
    At the tock of the clock

    And in that second
    I got a call from home
    I went numb inside
    I never felt so cold

    And I can’t help but feel so disconnected
    It seems so unreal, I’m almost unaffected
    But a part of my heart it hurts
    Cos I’ll never see you, I miss you so much
    I hope I see you up there someday
    To never be disconnected again

    I’m shaken and rattled
    Saddened and scared
    What if something happens?
    Will I in Him be dead?

    If not for me
    Or for anyone else
    I’ll live right, starting now
    Here’s my final farewell.




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