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    dots Submission Name: Balance, Chaos & Working Togetherdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 450
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 366



    Description:
       An abstract view of my journal - you can't have too much good - nothing can be completely sterile and you can't have all bad - all negative and destuctive - like all of nature and being - everything works together
    love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles 2 share ES!


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    dotsBalance, Chaos & Working Togetherdots
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    The outside environment
    holds no answers !
    Only questions &
    clues :;
    Nothing 2 gain -->
    >-- Nothing 2 lose

    Truth & BEINg
    found
    withIN { }
    Where there is no
    judgement
    & there is no sin

    Balance
    Chaos
    Working Together





    Submitted on 2008-03-01 14:53:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      "The outside environment
    holds no answers!"

    The world is a mystery, tiff, and you are just beginning to unravel it.

    I like the presentation of it (then again, you always have interesting presentation). I especially thought the "withIN {}" thing was interesting, with the "{}" being the "within" in ourselves.

    Ah, entropy (a measure of the disorder or randomness in a closed system) is a crazy thing isn't it? The world is a ball of chaos just waiting for peace. Dream of peace, tiff. Pray for it. Chaos is waiting to be gone.

    Again, I have to say this is quite interesting.

    Peace and Cosmic!
    ~AsiaticFox
    | Posted on 2008-03-05 00:00:00 | by AsiaticFox | [ Reply to This ]
      Isn't that the truth! I loved your clever presentation as well as the message in this poem. Some people manage to find happiness despite the chaos, and I aim to stand among them with you! Let's keep smiling. :-) Sharon
    | Posted on 2008-03-04 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      I am amazed at your ability to find positive in every negative, answer in every question, light embedded in darkness.....

    ......... and then to give it a coherent and lucid expression. You are an asset for your readers.

    Amazing........amazing.........
    | Posted on 2008-03-02 00:00:00 | by Parul garg | [ Reply to This ]
      Neat. I like this one... use of numbers and other symbols to make it... oh, easier.
    Sometimes the less words you use, the better.
    | Posted on 2008-03-01 00:00:00 | by Mieko | [ Reply to This ]
      I like it, very descriptive of a hard subject to word...

    Lovely as always Tiff
    | Posted on 2008-03-01 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]
      Woah... its kind of strange...but in a good way. It flows. And everything about it just goes...you know? I like it... It makes me feel...floaty. Nice work!
    | Posted on 2008-03-01 00:00:00 | by SweetAndOhSoME | [ Reply to This ]


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