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    dots Submission Name: Who's Next?dots
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    Author: MaxHam
    ASL Info:    20/m/NH USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 60/131/105
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 779
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 572



    Description:
       Just something I came up with the other night that might make a song someday...maybe not though


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    dotsWho's Next?dots
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    Wash my hair.
    Are you dead yet?
    Brush my hair.
    Are you dead yet?
    Dry my hair.
    Are you dead yet?

    Brush my teeth.
    Are you dead yet?
    Shave my face.
    Are you dead yet?
    Wash my hands.
    Are you dead yet?

    With so many things in the world to contemplate
    is there anything more important to ask than:
    Who's next?

    Vacumn my room.
    Are you dead yet?
    Sweep my floor.
    Are you dead yet.
    Clean the house.
    Are we dead yet?




    Submitted on 2008-03-02 08:31:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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