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    dots Submission Name: The Wayfarerdots
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    Author: Joachim
    ASL Info:    71 Male RSA
    Elite Ratio:    5.57 - 135/103/70
    Words: 173
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Longing
    Total Views: 124
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1289



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       Well - this is how I feel now. Funky and ........!


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    dotsThe Wayfarerdots
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    The Wayfarer.
    Chart the Heavens Plan the Flight
    Count the Stars and Stretch the Sky
    Swirling Mists Chunks of Grey
    Whirling Galaxies
    Infinite.

    Charted ways we Agree
    Land and Sea is not our Plea
    Cast a-ways we declare
    Visions of Wonder shall we Say
    Like Fairy Angels come out to Play.
    Infinite.

    Pathways Twisted Looped and Knotted
    Brittle Cold for There’s no Gold
    Robed in Thunder and Fiery Mantle
    Light the Heavens Paint the Sky
    Powders Sparkle and Pastels Bright
    Infinite.

    Created Visions with Fantasy Thunders
    Time Line Strangers Misty Farers
    Shadow Riders and Ghostly Silhouette
    The Canopy stretched in their Sight.
    Infinite.

    Colored Symbols with Streaks of Light
    Circled Squares and Pointed Stars
    Measured Powders Dusted Spaces
    Tabloid Sheets with Gilded Edges.
    Infinite.

    Mysteries Mingled with Sparkling Air
    The Wayfarers Dream
    Through the Night
    Traveling Light.

    Infinite!



















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      I love reading your verse, because it's music. Is there a story in this poem? I did not get a story out of it; just the impression of chaotic fireworks Universe and the dreamer trying to be all-aware.

    | Posted on 2008-03-13 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]


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