I like this poem. It's very honest and I think a lot of people can undestand how you are feeling. Lonliness is not a fun way to feel, but pretty much everyone feels it sometime in their life. I thought this piece was a nice way describe your emotions. Good wording.
i dont have a f-ing clue what this poem is about but i like it. the title is simple and sugests that it is just about some house but its more than that. there are feelings in the poem. its not about the house but about the emotion of the poet. i dont pretend to understand what your feeling but i like this poem. and the ending is awesome. it makes no sense but sounds perfect. i like this poem. keep them comeing. i like intelegent stuff that confuses me. and now im talking nosense. am i making sense? anyways good write
whoa i think the locke dude (comment under mine) got a little carried away. Amazing the stupidity that people will write just to get their ratios up. Anyways.. I really liked the darkness and sadness and loneliness and the death and the suicide you put into this. I sometimes look at something.. and it'll remind me of such a good time in my life.. like the opposite of right now.. you have a gun i can borrow?? ok later.. good write.