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    dots Submission Name: Little Maiden On Planet 9dots
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    Author: mrmundane
    ASL Info:    20/m/vancouver bc
    Elite Ratio:    2.51 - 47/88/61
    Words: 320
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsLittle Maiden On Planet 9dots
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    She sat leaning into her insides
    Her demons were always allegedly contained
    Forgetting wisdom she let loose her abandoned brick work
    There forever squeazing out her overcoat of stains
    Absorbing Flesh into flesh additionnnallll chemicalss
    Mespellin wooords all overrr the placeee
    It made little to no difference. Onwards.
    Is it innocent to have forgot to change?
    Charge in a new allegro, truant fresh face
    With a serenade dancing under your ribcage
    Change into a small start
    Together planted forever sown
    In the steamboats of cardinal mississippi miles
    Forget all thems troubles darlin' rose
    The points you've been staring at are backwards
    Even more wilderness grows
    As elastic firmly brushes us
    It bends into the sweet smell of futuristic entanglements
    By the north star, blinging in that ghetto sky
    As the golden star burns us brightly into decades to do
    My pupils grow like tree frogs' sucking off some simple dew
    Due, due for the next episode, the next great exam
    Of mad manic academia
    Which made little to no sense then,
    and made little to no sense here
    Some would say that it was the enemy
    Maybe, they will say,
    It is me, you.
    Sometimes red with black and grey lines
    Sometimes green blue
    In mornings sucking up retrospection
    Insanely picking at my inner poo
    I've found my stress test undeserving
    and when the black and black lines came
    and red lines and white lines and the yellow and the blue green
    Tapped into these unillateral taboos
    I find the damn things winning over me
    Into a newer direction, about to explode
    and my stupified face just described how relaxed i was
    To finally know who i was and who, the hell, are you
    To experience the finest boast-worthy education man will ever know
    My insight just led me to leave my ego behind
    As it was totally useless to you
    By that i mean you, man, i mean you.




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