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    dots Submission Name: Goddess Springdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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       Ah, Spring is on her way ~ these are times of inspiration and of growth
    Lots of blessings of love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share


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    dotsGoddess Springdots
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    The winds of change carry
    Goddess of the season Spring
    The warmth of new life she scatters
    To thaw her Winter King

    Leaves of green and buds of color
    bejewel her fragrant crown
    And, All is resurrected beneath
    a carpet lifeless brown
    While fields of rain-drenched grasses
    roll as her flowing gown

    Within her hands she holds the sun
    Which glows and lengthens days
    As icy cold mountains
    melt beneath her gaze

    Birds and fish do follow her
    Up rivers ~ over seas
    Flowers are songs of color
    calling to the bees

    King Winter dances with her
    As he begins to fade away
    And, she kisses him in Love
    Knowing he'll be back another day...




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      Very pastoral, tiff. Also, very uplifting, since I can't wait until winter is gone again. Man, it just drags on and on. It's a real snow storm out today, and the college is closed. And I have to shovel. Kill me.

    I always appreciate your uplifting and positive messages, tiff.

    "Within her hands she holds the sun
    Which glows and lengthens days
    As icy cold mountains
    melt beneath her gaze"

    This sounds really cool. I could just see Spring shooting rays of sun out of her eyes like Cyclops from X-men and melting the ice and snow. Wicked cool. I wish I could do that.

    Bzap! Bzap! Take that snow! Take that old man winter!

    Hehe, heat beams.

    Peace and Cosmic!
    ~AsiaticFox
    | Posted on 2008-03-05 00:00:00 | by AsiaticFox | [ Reply to This ]
      I love the way you relate Spring to Winter, for indeed it's almost like a love affair where they are fighting for dominance in a peaceful battle.

    "Flowers are songs of color" I love this since I'm a music lover and I think some people "see" music and Hear color. To me it called out to a symphony of color and texture that is my garden.

    Happy Spring!
    ~jan
    | Posted on 2008-03-04 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
      This is absolutely wonderful! A most fitting tribute to the coming of spring, and a noble aknowledgment to the passing of winter! Well done, lovely lady!
    | Posted on 2008-03-04 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      I really liked this! There' s nothing I would change! It seems like you have been sitting around looking forward to Spring..and like you, I take note of Mother Nature, and appreciate her and the seasons...Anyway, this was a beautiful piece!!
    Melancholymaid
    | Posted on 2008-03-03 00:00:00 | by melancholymaid | [ Reply to This ]
      Spring is my favorite season and it's a joy to read your beautiful poem honoring the majesty of our Goddess Spring! Nicely written and much appreciated! :-) Sharon
    | Posted on 2008-03-02 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      Awe Tiff, this is beautiful, just beautiful.

    "As icy cold mountains
    melt beneath her gaze"

    Spring time is in the air, spring time is in the feeling of reading this.
    Magnificant, I just adored the way these words flowed,
    I really mean that.
    I like the way change was around, but its coming is done in a peaceful way.


    Beautiful Tiff..

    Love from

    Matt

    | Posted on 2008-03-02 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]


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