Description: Ah, Spring is on her way ~ these are times of inspiration and of growth
Lots of blessings of love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
Goddess Spring -------------------------------------------
The winds of change carry
Goddess of the season Spring
The warmth of new life she scatters
To thaw her Winter King
Leaves of green and buds of color
bejewel her fragrant crown
And, All is resurrected beneath
a carpet lifeless brown
While fields of rain-drenched grasses
roll as her flowing gown
Within her hands she holds the sun
Which glows and lengthens days
As icy cold mountains
melt beneath her gaze
Birds and fish do follow her
Up rivers ~ over seas
Flowers are songs of color
calling to the bees
King Winter dances with her
As he begins to fade away
And, she kisses him in Love
Knowing he'll be back another day...
Very pastoral, tiff. Also, very uplifting, since I can't wait until winter is gone again. Man, it just drags on and on. It's a real snow storm out today, and the college is closed. And I have to shovel. Kill me.
I always appreciate your uplifting and positive messages, tiff.
"Within her hands she holds the sun
Which glows and lengthens days
As icy cold mountains
melt beneath her gaze"
This sounds really cool. I could just see Spring shooting rays of sun out of her eyes like Cyclops from X-men and melting the ice and snow. Wicked cool. I wish I could do that.
Bzap! Bzap! Take that snow! Take that old man winter!
I love the way you relate Spring to Winter, for indeed it's almost like a love affair where they are fighting for dominance in a peaceful battle.
"Flowers are songs of color" I love this since I'm a music lover and I think some people "see" music and Hear color. To me it called out to a symphony of color and texture that is my garden.
This is absolutely wonderful! A most fitting tribute to the coming of spring, and a noble aknowledgment to the passing of winter! Well done, lovely lady!
I really liked this! There' s nothing I would change! It seems like you have been sitting around looking forward to Spring..and like you, I take note of Mother Nature, and appreciate her and the seasons...Anyway, this was a beautiful piece!!
Melancholymaid
Spring is my favorite season and it's a joy to read your beautiful poem honoring the majesty of our Goddess Spring! Nicely written and much appreciated! :-) Sharon
Spring time is in the air, spring time is in the feeling of reading this.
Magnificant, I just adored the way these words flowed,
I really mean that.
I like the way change was around, but its coming is done in a peaceful way.
Submission Name: Goddess Spring
