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    dots Submission Name: She Blew Against The Winddots
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    Author: Flowerinbloom
    ASL Info:    22/M/Earth (I think)
    Elite Ratio:    3.5 - 700/559/123
    Words: 170
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
    Total Views: 878
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1087



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       For Manuela -from a friendly whisper in your ear, rest in peace my darling.


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    dotsShe Blew Against The Winddots
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    The machine breathed for her
    but her strength was her own.
    The fire had left her body
    but burned passionately in her eyes.
    I held her hands so many times
    hoping she felt my touch,
    drew strength from my love
    but the strength had left her body
    and I couldn't read the fire in her eyes.


    I'd whisper to her,
    a voice giving her courage to hold on.
    Hoping to pull her close
    and anchor her soul.
    It's ok to be selfish isn't it,
    when its someone you love?
    Someone you wronged,
    who needed you when she was lost
    and you were the one who couldn't be found?


    She was drifting I could feel it,
    I couldn't hold on to her anymore.
    The machine breathed for her
    but her strength was her own
    and the pain didn't feel like home.
    I couldn't be selfish anymore
    not when it risked her soul.
    The fire in her eyes burned cold
    and she blew against the wind.




    Submitted on 2008-03-03 01:32:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is Beautiful!!

    It's both sad and happy in the fact that there is so much love and dignity here. The feelings are raw, but that is as it should be, and somehow in the end, through the stuggle between life and death, we're actually happy that she finally found her release; her peace.

    jan
    | Posted on 2008-03-04 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]


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